Lonliness and The Dove
Posted by akamrromance on March 24, 2011
What is the full affect of a lonely soul
Something no person should ever know
The soul wilts like flower pedals
On a hot summers day
A bitter feeling that builds up inside
This is a truth that I regretfully say
This is something that no person can deny
If a person does it is probably a lie
Light a candle for the lonesome souls
Lift them up so their soul can glow
If you have that special someone in your life
Return that gift generously, return it trice
Treat that person with kindness and love
Revere them like the magnificent peace dove
jingle poetry said
brilliant.
another kind of emotion, but you have done an eloquent job.
feel free to share 1 to 3 random poems with us, our poetry potluck week 29 is to open on Sunday, at 8pm, American central..we remain open for 72 hours..
hope to see you in.
bless you.
keep up the excellence.
love
xxx
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akamrromance said
This one was insomnia induced. Written at 5 in the morning after being up 20 hrs. Please tell me more about the potluck.
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Jingle Poetry said
thanks for joining us last week.
come in again.
have fun..
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Jingle said
Glad to discover your poetry talent,
join poets rally.
make poetic friends, get encouragements via awards.
come on in, the collection is to be closed within 25 hours.
cheers.
hope to see you in ASAP…..
your talent rocks.
visit me now………….
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